You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Hello Tina,
I am Priyankaa residing in your opposite flat. I'm glad to introduce myself to you. Me and my family have moved to this place since last week.I came to your home to meet you,but unfortunately i was not able to see you.
Our family is foreseeing to have a party this weekend at my place. I would like to invite you and grace the event. My friends will be joining the event and we are planning to have a rock dance event, due to which we will be procuring a new amplifier.
I hope this may cause some noise and disturb you. It was our long day plan to have a rock dance, I apologize in advance if the event may hinder you. My friends will not trouble you at any cost.
I hope you will also enjoy the party. Expecting your arrival at 9 AM. We can have rock dance event followed by lunch.
Please consider my invite in person and join us.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...iyankaa residing in your opposite flat. Im glad to introduce myself to you. Me and...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ave moved to this place since last week.I came to your home to meet you,but unfor...
^
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ast week.I came to your home to meet you,but unfortunately i was not able to see you...
^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...your home to meet you,but unfortunately i was not able to see you. Our family ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20067501498 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0437044915 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.9230769231 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255767309588 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864199125018 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594116958657 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139915878083 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833184113419 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.