the graphs show the different needs people spent frequently in Britain from 1972 to 2001.Overall, people in the UK changed partially needs of life, which have been a high life style than people live in 19 century.
firstly, the needs people of petrol decreased dramatically by 28%, in the first time the amount of petrol needs about 36% but in 2001 the people used about 8%.Moreover, the citizens used approximately one to third of furniture and a quarter of restaurants which fell in 2001 by 24% respectively about one to ten.
Secondarily, the needs of people changed than people spent a lot of money with plenty other things such as the cars by 43% and foods by 14% also 1% of people would have read a book.Despite 7% of citizens used the computer since 1971, which increased slightly by about 5%.in 2001.
in conclusion, the needs people developed, they used more technologies than the citizens in 1971.
- Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills.Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success.To what extent,do you agree or disagree? 78
- All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity.This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for thisrise in obesity, How could it be tackled? 61
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than h 56
- it is more important to have a good family than to have friends Family can always compensate for absence of friendships To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: Overall
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Suggestion: centuries
... high life style than people live in 19 century. firstly, the needs people of petrol d...
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Suggestion: Moreover
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...lso 1% of people would have read a book.Despite 7% of citizens used the computer since ...
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...ncreased slightly by about 5%.in 2001. in conclusion, the needs people developed,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152866242 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72319624727 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1777798435 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.0 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.5 5.23603664747 392% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262313630742 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16273154055 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693088871292 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16273154055 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693088871292 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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