the graphs show the different needs people spent frequently in Britain from 1972 to 2001.Overall, people in the UK changed partially needs of life, which have been a high life style than people live in 19 century.
firstly, the needs people of petrol decreased dramatically by 28%, in the first time the amount of petrol needs about 36% but in 2001 the people used about 8%.Moreover, the citizens used approximately one to third of furniture and a quarter of restaurants which fell in 2001 by 24% respectively about one to ten.
Secondarily, the needs of people changed than people spent a lot of money with plenty other things such as the cars by 43% and foods by 14% also 1% of people would have read a book.Despite 7% of citizens used the computer since 1971, which increased slightly by about 5%.in 2001.
in conclusion, the needs people developed, they used more technologies than the citizens in 1971.
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Immigration: The Poor Man’s Escape 78
- The graph below shows cinema attendance by age group in Great Britain 92
- it is more important to have a good family than to have friends . Family can always compensate for absence of friendships.To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 52
- The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the graphs show the different needs people ...
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Suggestion: Overall
...frequently in Britain from 1972 to 2001.Overall, people in the UK changed partially nee...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
... high life style than people live in 19 century. firstly, the needs people of petrol d...
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Suggestion: Firstly
... style than people live in 19 century. firstly, the needs people of petrol decreased d...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...6% but in 2001 the people used about 8%.Moreover, the citizens used approximately one to...
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Suggestion: Despite
...lso 1% of people would have read a book.Despite 7% of citizens used the computer since ...
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Suggestion: In
...ncreased slightly by about 5%.in 2001. in conclusion, the needs people developed,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152866242 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72319624727 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1777798435 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.0 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.5 5.23603664747 392% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262313630742 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16273154055 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693088871292 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16273154055 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693088871292 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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