The violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Many blockbuster movies and television programs of recent times portray violent characters committing grave crimes. While some people believe that such violent acts of movie characters influence the society badly, others maintain that violence in cinema will not cause people to become criminals. This essay will discuss how crimes in the society are increasing, because of violent movies.
Children tend to imitate the acts of their favorite heroes. When kids see bloody battles and other fights in the movies, they get an impression that violence is perfectly alright in life. Recent survey indicates that popularity of cartoon characters with anti-social behavior is increasing among young kids. This has the potential to eventually turn kids into criminal mid sets and, therefore, it is clear that violent movies can impact the society in a bad way.
Despite the evident influence of movies on audience, some people think that movies are for entertainment purpose only and have not reached the potential to create criminals. But what they don't understand is that the movie industry has grown significantly over the last decade with the evolution of technology and the internet. Many movies are now showcasing plots where heroes commit crime in a very sophisticated way. These show the society new methods of crime, which is emulated by movie watchers. Crime statistics from developed countries show a rise in criminal activity soon after box-office success of violent movies, which clearly shows that watching violent movies can bring criminal tendencies in people.
This essay discussed how the society is negatively affected by the violent acts of movie characters. In my opinion, it is highly possible that people who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38434163701 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62112629627 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5345934009 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34817462915 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116281241273 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960550039143 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222145919223 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886725145378 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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