In future natural resources such as coal and oil will be used up. How can we reduce their deplition?
What are the alternative sources of energy available.
Commercialisation has grown rapidly in modern era.Nowadays, folk are using excessively to natural resources such as oil ,coil and so on in the course of which these environment al resources surely come down to its extinct ion ,in the years to come. Here i would like to establish my views on this burning issue, including reasons and conclusion with my own preception.
As far as my consultant ,natural resources are using by fits and starts which is the fly in the ontment. Moreover, by using other sourses such as wind energy, geothermal, sunlight through sonal pannels, solar energy and so on instead of natural resources help us to reduce the deplition of environment al resource .
In addition, using electrical equipment s are the robust solution to curtail this problem such as metro-trains unlike coal trains ,rechargeable vehicles and so on.Hence,these resources are expensive but on the flip side these are optimum way to reduse the deplition.
Furthermore, the three R S reduce, reduction ,recycle are vital to conserve energy. Ultimately, manufacturing of energy efficient vehicles seems a reliable way to preserve oil at large extant. Moreover, people should be fosrceted to use public transport and bicycle too. In addition, it is the need of hour to be more economical in our fuel consumption.
At length, there are numerous alternative sourses which are useful like as compressed natural gas and L.P.G as well as women at home would use electrical stoves to make food rather than using woods and coal. Thus, electrical gadgets can be recycled but environmental not Thence, alternative's are best way to save natural resources.
To recapitulate, "waste not want not" should be our watchword and media and social institute can also address people about the importance of natural resources.
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