The diagram shows how fruit is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process that pears undergo to be canned.
First of all, fruits are hand-picked from their trees. Then they are transported to the industry, where they are washed, checked and cold stored. The next sequence of images illustrates other different stages, where the pears are weighed, peeled, cored into smaller slices and finally they are canned into several cans. After that, the cans are sealed and put over a fire, where they can be sterilized and the pears can be cooked. Subsequently, the jars are labelled and they are carried to the storage, from where they are taken by trucks and despatched to the stores.
Overall, the process consists of fourteen stages, beginning with the harvest of fruits and ending up with the despatch to the shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35485146958 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4197712747 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892368299964 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460131396808 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270718488885 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684602450096 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316580473216 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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