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Technology is always good??????saaaahhhhhhhaaaarrrrr
Once, by using technology, mankind could be able to make the life better and easier on the earth. But, it is difficult to express that technology is always good today. To be perfectly frank, I am extremely opposed to this statement. The earth is getting hurt by the all proceedings called technology. With the uses of the biological and physical resources, the earth has brought into a dangerous condition. On the other hand, technology, however, is companied by emitting lots of pollution to the nature.
First of all, the earth is depleting of the physical sources such as grounds, natural fuels,...
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Sentence: The earth is getting hurt by the all proceedings called technology.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to the and all
Sentence: Therefore, the today's technology has led to the more and reckless uses of the land and nonrenewable sources.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a noun, singular, adverbial, genitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and today's
Sentence: Self-satisfied human with help of technology are able to take advantage of the wildlife.
Description: The fragment help of technology is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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Sentence Length SD: 5.907 7.5
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 416 350
No. of Characters: 2042 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.516 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.909 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.751 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.907 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5