Nowadays, technology plays an important role in people’s life. Some people think that technology give negative effects for social life. However, other people could give benefit for them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this century, the invention of technology changes people’s life. People could easily participate in some activities, and they believe that technology have some negative impacts for social relationship. However, other people think that technology aids them to communicate more effectively than previous years.
Some people give opinions that technology has a tendency to reduce people to face-to-face because some sophisticated tools encourage people do not need to make appointments to meet in some places. Also, people seem busy with their smartphone. It could influences relationship between...
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Suggestion: Refer to could and influences
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