it is better to have one true friend than all the acquaintances in the world .
do you agree or disagree with this statement
Although, the experience of someone is very difficult to be create, despite a real friend can always help him.
Incompletely agree with this opinion and i think that true friend is much more important than others acquaintances.
First of all, i believe that people should have a real friend ,they depend on it. Even if, someone have many reconnaissance in the world , but he feels sad and unhappy.This person doesn't have a good friend which is keeping his secrets, while he knows every people. For example, a good deal of research said that stress and anxiety as result of people doesn't talks about their secret and problems, he doesn't have real friend to discuss with him. That's why a good friend can help person to sens happy every day.
secondly, person have true friend can recommend to choose easy solution of problems.It is clear that there is strong relation between true friend and people.A good friend is able to help him. Moreover, he solve it and following to expect his objective. For instance,they say that" a friend in need is a friend indeed".thus, advantage of a true friend can always need it .
To conclude, i strongly believe that the true friend is much more important than all acquaintances in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76808244309 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7607910771 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278016413056 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118999277068 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865638860574 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175584508328 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867310981149 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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