Issue Topic
A multi-national corporation should require all of its employees to learn several languages in order to advance within the corporation.
Discuss whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Use relevant reasons and examples to support your point of view. In developing and supporting your position, consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true. Explain how those considerations affect your point of view.
It is precisely true that learning distinct languages helps us to maintain the position we hold in the business world. It is not surprising for a high ranked company to pose such litigations, as per its requirements. Therefore, I accede to the statement that the employee’s needs to equip himself with enough skills to endeavor his job.
Speaking in many languages is an art in itself. Deciphering the tedious crypts of an issue is done with ease if one is multi lingual. Today’s fast paced fastidious jobs require a clear medium to interact with the diverse deals it has on daily basis. ...
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 434 350
No. of Characters: 2131 1500
No. of Different Words: 273 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.564 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.91 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.724 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.36 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.498 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.446 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5