The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The significant increase in the popularity level of fashionable apparels and latest consumer products among people have greatly affected their tendency to imitate each other, in order to look superior and best. In my opinion, i agree that there are a few individuals who limit their fashion sense, likes and dislikes to the latest trends but there are others who introduce and follow their own trends or modify the existing ones according to their comfort.
Human population these days, inevitably follow the trending clothing and consumer items owing to the social pressure they are constantly subjected to. It is firmly believed by individuals that being up-to-date with latest trends would earn them a high social status or raise their rank in society. Humans tend to believe that if they do not cope up with the latest trends they would be judged as incompetent, indigent, mentally challenged and hence, would be mocked, harassed or even abused for having poor or no fashion sense.resultantly, such individuals are titled to be unfit for society.
Nevertheless, there are a handful of people who in spite of bothering what others point of views are, opt to follow their own will. These people do not imitate the clothing style or buy products by getting influenced from others but instead modify the trending styles, so they do not have to cross their comfort level. For instance, if red hair and loose or lengthy outfits are in vogue they would go for red hair but with short or tight dresses. Indisputably, such people stand out in a crowd due to their unique style.
In conclusion, even though people copy each other in terms of fashionable dresses and consumer items owing to the constant social pressure and end up all looking similar. However, there are a few people who prioritize comfort, their like and dislikes for getting dressed and purchasing products despite imitating rest of the world and hence, stand out amongst others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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... harassed or even abused for having poor or no fashion sense.resultantly, such in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02160493827 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59565332264 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1007958581 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202012445712 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743551222342 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447763307234 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118627003312 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226196763905 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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