Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
In the competitive world, television is considered one of the vital invention in spreading news and awareness nowadays. Televisions are found now with many forms and sizes to serve the different segments. Some people believes that television is very essentional in our daily life while other argues that it had a great negative impact in the connections between people.
First of all, television demonstrates the daily news in the whole world. I can't imagine how can we know what happen at the other side of the world without this invention. Television also shows the different prespectives through the different talk shows. Nevertheless, it demonstrates the different cultures, daily news and awareness to the old people and housewifes that are not exposed to the outer world.
However, sometimes this invention has negative impact on the social connection between families. Most families spent their free time watching television rather than chatting with their children and that increased the gap between them.
In my opinion, television has undeniable effect for people awareness especially to those who stayed at home for long time. Hence, families should realise how to use it wisely to avoid increasing any gap between parents and their children.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that television is an essential part in our lives that should be used wisely to avoid its negative side on our daily comnuncations in the families.
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| 2018-03-21 | metti | 77 | view |
| 2018-03-20 | miraboushra | 85 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...es the daily news in the whole world. I cant imagine how can we know what happen at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36206896552 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8324049562 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.439951923 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128571361073 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460759495482 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395875223307 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672332995977 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245063977452 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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