The given graph provides the information about the percentage of Australian who engaged in physical activity by gender and age group in 2010.
In overal, the majority of males, particularly in teenage age, do more exercise than women at the same age, whereas in the older age group,
the proportion of women taking physical exercise is greater than those of males do.
Regarding to gender, the percentage of Australian males at the age of 15 to 24 that tend to take most exercise is 52.8 percent and the percentage
declines slightly when they get older. The lowest percentage of men is 39 percent at the age 35 to 41 year old.
Conversely, the percentage of Australian women in term of physical activity are less than males in the youngest age group but dramatically increase with age. In details, there are only 47% of female under 24 years old having physical exercise and
the percentage slightly rise up to 53 percent at the age of 45 to 54 as also the highest percentage of women in comparison with the other age groups.
Noticeably, the proportion of Australian over 65 year old in both sexes are approximately equal about 47 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82412060302 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73402857514 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.723442471 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317889370843 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17177861811 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985046296214 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148950872546 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940472690757 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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