Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
give details of how you and friends or family use the centre
explain why sport and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir
I am inscribing this missive regarding vthe advert in the yesterday's local newspaper about closing of 'Family Centre' that is situated in our society.
First of all, I would say it should not be closed, because myself, my family and all my society mates visit the centre in our leisure time. Moreover, most of the youngsters have joined the sports club membership to keep them fit. In addition to this, it is very important to have it in our area, as old people mostly spend their free time to meet their peer groupvin hall of the centre and exchange their views and do the activities, such as, yoga and laughter therapy. It is like a second home to them.
Further, having a sports centre in our premises encourage children to play in the evening time, inspite of watching Television or using electronic gazattes. It's loss would affect all the age group. As it is our assest, which is going to be lost. I know, centre is going through financial loss, but it can be compensated by having funds from society members, as I know everyone will contribute their nest to save it.
I hope to hear something positive from your side.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Anand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, regarding, second, so, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43004473593 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.892537478 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166378611292 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558903976667 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04425380658 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882787097548 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238224437216 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.