life is unpredictable and human beings have inclination to commit blunder very often in the amidst of flattery, allurements of worldly pleasure. Indeed consequences of bad decision can make one feel guilty and not left. with any other options. Awful decision can result in depression and jeopardizing life. To begin with it is prudent to predict positive and negative outcomes of any decision. Compelling example of this situation is my friend's tragic story. One of my friend was very much obsessed with wrestling. In spite of denial from all other family members, she desperately wanted to be a famous wrestler. However, all of a sudden she was critically injured during fight. As a result of that she suffered from quadriplegia and lost all her abilities to perform activities of daily living. Unfortunately, she repented extremely for her decision and became victim of severe depression. If she would have choose decent career of engineer or business woman she would have prevented such devastating consequences.
Second, sexually transmitted diseases and other air born infections are spreading malignantly everywhere. It is imperative to follow safety precautions to avoid contamination especially for the health care workers and people living below line. Moreover, increasing number of people suffering from diseases such as AIDS is culprit in passing diseases to progeny. Apparently, it can hamper health of many generations in family. Thus, it is foolishness not to follow antiseptic precautions in health care field, better to prevent than cure. Hence, widespread education must be offered to the illiterate people to save many offsprings from deadly diseases.
In a nutshell, after analyzing the prompt it is worth saying that one should forecast future results before taking any decision and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, however, if, moreover, second, thus, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37755102041 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94709588403 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9646476606 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2105263158 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10516884172 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290862197039 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037760839378 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667948095289 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112436912445 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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