Nowadays people are started exploring various new products and only the large shopping malls can sustain these products. As a result most of the local tiny shops are gets closed.This essay will discuss both views before concluding any remarks.
On one hand, the large shopping centers are having wide variety of branded products, cloths and are with extreme quality, so most of the consumers are alluring to shopping centers. These shopping malls are maintaining all day to day products at one place, So consumers are finding easy access to all their needs and they are saving their valuable time. Another advantage is these shopping malls are consists of various goods belongs to various cultures and traditions , the buyers can explore the cultural diversity and they can give a try to other choices. Furthermore most of the shopping malls are very clean ,untidy and fully air-conditioned with good ambiance, so customers are easily be convinced by these facilities and the government also earns revenue in each year from the shopping malls.
On the other hand, there are few negative aspects with this change, this shopping mall culture is giving adverse affect to the local retail shops. The previous generation is left with no choice so they were fully dependent on local shops and faced hardship with the retailers on prices. But these days the consumers having different options so the local retailers are having bitter days and few shops are getting closed. This act is giving bad impact on their lives,left with no income and are unable to meet their both ends. And another impact is , in some scenarios this shopping mall culture vanishing the local customs and traditions.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that it is indeed a debatable issue which needs further analysis and discussion. However, in the light of above plausible argument along with example, it would be quite safe to conclude that this is a positive development to visit shopping centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03963414634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4953013697 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.44184111 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288376680015 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111844357795 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541554719983 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16753468495 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545891526173 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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