Nowadays people living in a large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Subsequently, larger cities having been encountered with the population explosion in terms of inhabitants due to many intriguing sightseeing and other factors. In spite of this, they are inclined to impend with some daily issues which they have to tackle with. These kind of problems are chiefly caused by over population, crime rates and other agents. Some would claim that these sort of issues will correct itself over time. In my view, however, there is much that can be done to address the issue constructively.
The major problem that extensive cities being faced is matters which caused by over population. Considerable allocation of private cars, and lacked of job positions are the spectacular examples. Due to shortage of job position in congested urban places some people tend to do minor crimes, such as robbery, theft and other more in order to survive. One possible approach is to assess a prohibition to immigrants who are residing in the city. However, it would be the barrier between nations and, thus, as for the international communication it can have a negative impact.
Another possible approach is the encouragement of people to indwell in smaller towns. In other words, they should be provided with prodigious social consideration as well as the high salaries. Most of the people enjoy earning money, hence, this might be the decent solution entice people to live in smaller towns.
In conclusion, despite the development of large cities, there are many negative prospects and the issues that we have to deal with in every day life. Issues are often caused by many factors as I mentioned above, such as urban congestion and rate of crime. It may be seen insurmountable in next years, however, this is a problem that is solvable as time goes by.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... issues which they have to tackle with. These kind of problems are chiefly caused by over ...
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Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...and other agents. Some would claim that these sort of issues will correct itself over time...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...nd the issues that we have to deal with in every day life. Issues are often caused by many f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, in my view, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77145129093 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9010541946 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181798160053 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054613905222 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523855145133 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106302339907 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411888448086 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.