Poilitics and social views are important part of our lives. They define who will win on the elections and our thinkning about different social problems such as alcoholism, corruption and ecomomical problems. That's why it is so important to have the right one which will improve lives of citizen of your community. Some people believe that teacher should make their social and political views known to students in the classroom; others disagree. Event thought some people might find important that teacher shares his opinion because it increases knowledge of students about tdifferent topics. In my view, teacher should not make their social and political views known to students in the classroom for two important reasons.
The main reason is that children could be influenced by teacher and make wrong decision. Children see teacher as a source of knowledge, they don't have enough their own life experience to oppose or support his views. As a result, they begin to think that his opinion is right even though it can be totally wrong in many sense. For example, at my school I have math teacher she explains the material very well but sometimes during the breaks she told that we shouldn't learn humanitarian subjects and focus on math and other accurate science such as physics, chemistry, biology. And my classmate, who has ability to draw very well, get influenced and decided to give up painting. This experience taught me that teacher should not make their social and political views known to students in the classroom.
Another important reason is that it can cause seriouse problems inside the class. All children in a class sometimes have different backgrounds, financial abilities and problems within a family. Teacher's opinion could make somebody feel uncomfortable in a class. For instance, one of my clasmates is a pretty nice and smart girl. She does her homework every time no mater how difficult it is. But she has a problem within her family, her father is severe alcoholic. One day, our literature teacher shared with us her preconception that alcoholism can be genetic. Her statement didn't have any scientific proof but many of my classmates stoped speaking with girl who had problem inside the family. It isolated her from the rest when she needed assistance from outside. As you can see teacher souldn't share his opinion inside a class.
In conclusion, teacher shouldn't share his ideas about politics and social problems inside society with students. Not only because children get influenced and take wrong decisions but also it can cause serious problems.
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...but also it can cause serious problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09905660377 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58528006516 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2693837039 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0833333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233120172913 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738158385392 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104184055181 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141048048472 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755137796795 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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