Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents are the best teachers Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people believe that parents are the best teachers in children's life, however others think otherwise. The latter state that kids learn more when in high school than at home. In my opinion, younger have more opportunities to learn when at school rather than at home.
First of all, there are many well-trained teachers who can assist properly children in a variety of subjects. For example, when I was in high school I had difficulties in learn math. Luckily there were extra classes with special teachers who were capable of looking after my math skills. Not merely did they assist me but , also, they oversaw many other students alike. Thus, all of my drawbacks were solved by leaps and bounds.
Moreover, with many highly trained teachers and with plenty of time spent at school, chances are for pupils to succeed in life further. For instance, nowadays there are, in many countries, more students spending most of the time at school than at home. We can mention Japan as one example, where students are left at school early in the morning and are taken late in the afternoon. Therefore, they will have a bunch of lessons to learn and, certainly, they will be more qualified than other part-time students.
Furthermore, there are many situations around the world where not only don't parents have much knowledge but also children do not spend much time at home. The latter, in most of the circumstances, is more in contact with teachers and other pupils than among father and mother. Then, it cannot be said that parents are the best teacher for children.
Finally, after analyzing the facts, it can be definitely concluded that, nowadays, kids have been spending plenty of their times among teachers and their classmates than with parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...kills. Not merely did they assist me but , also, they oversaw many other students ...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uations around the world where not only dont parents have much knowledge but also ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90878378378 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41948654333 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5861838054 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973834099292 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392108099948 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458872766015 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644829901055 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378068116714 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.2 Out of 6.0
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