How to keep healthy life?
Everybody has said: Health is more valuable than gold. It's true. If you don't have health, your money is nothing. And how to have a healthy life? I'll tell you.
First, you should eat more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, a which is good for your eyes and they also provide fiber, a which is good for your digestive system. In addition, you should do more exercises and stay outdoor to do more physical activities, such as: jogging, playing football, yoga,... to burn more calories. Moreover, yoga will help you prevent illness and makes you more supple. You shouldn't spend time to play computer games, it's not good for your eyes. You shouldn't eat junk food and high fat food to keep you from getting fat. You should follow the advice from doctors and health expert in order to keep fit. You shouldn't smoke or drink beer, wine,... You should sleep 8 hours a day and go to sleep early because it good for your skin. Instead of surfing the Internet, you should read books before going to sleep, because it will take you to dream more beautiful
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| 2019-07-26 | Hafween | 100 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | Aiana Muriel | 100 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...such as: jogging, playing football, yoga,... to burn more calories. Moreover, yoga...
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... illness and makes you more supple. You shouldnt spend time to play computer games, its ...
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... fat food to keep you from getting fat. You should follow the advice from doctors a...
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...and health expert in order to keep fit. You shouldnt smoke or drink beer, wine,... ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58421052632 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11071005894 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 618.680645161 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4582967115 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2142857143 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800676589488 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499487012688 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149902707042 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104900389761 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775210744192 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 86.8835125448 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.