How to keep healthy life?
I am going to outline several tips and ways for a healthy life based on my own experiences in this following essay.
Firstly, do wake up early and do some morning exercises. According to some trustworthy evidences, people who do gymnastics everyday tend to live longer and less suffer from sickness. Secondly, pay attention to nutrition and daily meals everyday. you must balance meat, dairy products and vegetables. if necessary, vegetarian diets is also a good choice to stay healthy.
Thirdly, spend time going to hospital to do medical check-up at least once a month. if you are suffering a disease, doctor will help you to cure and prevent. Finally, keep your mood relaxed. Of course, we cannot laugh or be happy uninterruptedly, but don't let anger or anxiety harm your nerves. do control your mind carefully.
In short, I am of opinion that these upmentioned ground can help you to get access to a healthy life.
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| 2019-07-25 | Aiana Muriel | 100 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: If
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...laugh or be happy uninterruptedly, but dont let anger or anxiety harm your nerves. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
... let anger or anxiety harm your nerves. do control your mind carefully. In short...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, at least, in short, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86624203822 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76736749509 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.764331210191 0.524837075471 146% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6066809277 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121065063586 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371855673938 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064950631305 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887889209298 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720741280293 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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