Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
The different styles of life are the results of the information technology and these days it's significant in our family as well as daily activities. This essay will demonstrate that it's more problematic than advantages. Firstly, it conveys the use of information technologies eases life as the advantages,
but it makes far from society and social activities as the major drawbacks.
The use of the technologies is shifting our lifestyles and working strategies to the new approach. Due to the use of computers people shouldn't have to compute the long-range of mathematical calculations, an effective decision-making process easy. It's also changing our normal activities, work schedules, and communication styles than that we used to prefer earlier. According to the research, recently mobile phone users are growing globally because of the easy communication setup and other beneficial functions they have. To have a luxurious life with the use of technologies are better but physical activities and social norms are the factors ruined by the use of information technologies.
Technologies powers the people to become more informative but less active in social programs and physical fitness. Pupils are being lazy these days because they are using a well-developed computer system to perform their tasks also while spending their free time. There might be some of the social concern that a complete society needs to get informed but such inactivity can result in them for poor interactions. Even some of the jobs need active involvement rather than using technologies. For example, conduction local sanitation and public awareness program in the society can only be possible with direct simulation among neighbors. Thus, being knowledgeable regarding technologies is somewhat extrovert but weakening ones healths and being far from the family and social relations can cause serious impacts.
In conclusion, use of technologies are beneficial to some extent but have more drawbacks. Technologies can certainly reduce some of the workloads and makes easy but utilizing time on it can cause a serious impact in relation and personal health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47289156627 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09167490113 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3882694814 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180275760832 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06838156329 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680349667764 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100045872058 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668004890211 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.1 Out of 6.0
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