Read the two texts below. Write an essay summarising and evaluating the key points from both texts.
Use your own words throughout as far as possible, and include your own ideas in your answers.
The two extracts express contrasting views on the topic of what type of clothing is suitable in different contexts.
The first author claims that formal wear can express detachment between professionals and the people they serve. This type of clothing serves as an immediate signal that the situation will not be casual, and thus, demands a sense of decorum. The author also adds that formal clothing can help express the knowledge and authority of the wearer. Because of this, when we look at people who choose to dress themselves in dress shirts, suits and ties, naturally, we feel assured.
Conversely, the second author believes that casual wear may be more effective in many contexts. They further argue that uniforms impose an air of intimidation and dominance upon their wearers, especially when the wearers have to cooperate with particularly vulnerable demographics, and thus, informal clothes are more suitable. However, this author notes that for some public occasions, such as funerals and weddings, the wearing of formal clothing is deeply intertwined with the occasions themselves. Because of this, any deviation from the formal dress code may be seen as a sign of a lack of respect.
Personally, I agree that professionals should wear formal clothing while carrying out their work. Without exerting a sense of authority from the get-go, the people whom these professionals serve may deem the professionals to be inadequate in their skills. However, for certain lines of work that entails working with traditionally oppressed demographics, like social workers, I recommend that workers in those fields should opt for casual clothing, as formalwear may result in feelings of intimidation and distrust, thus impeding their work.
In conclusion, formal wear should be worn by the majority of professionals at work, and by all participants at certain events. However, people working with maligned demographics should wear more informal clothing instead.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41558441558 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033678996 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4662411827 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0175816568457 0.236089414692 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00747078715998 0.076458572812 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101772026216 0.0737576698707 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.012149274001 0.150856017488 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00847240706206 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.2 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41558441558 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033678996 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4662411827 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0175816568457 0.236089414692 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00747078715998 0.076458572812 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101772026216 0.0737576698707 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.012149274001 0.150856017488 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00847240706206 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.2 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.