Living in a city or staying in a small village

Many people say that staying in a city is be tter but some say the opposite, as for me i like both places. here are some reasons why i say that. First, living in a city has all of the new technology from the hospital, restaurants to even our house already have modern technology, i'm not saying that small villages do not have good tech but it is not as good as what the cities have, on the other hand though, small villages are more peaceful and there is less pollution than the big cities have so you can make a poem or fly kites or other activities without noises and don't have to worry about where you play. Of course, the cities have those arcade and 3D virtual reality that everybody loves don't even start about the loud festival with many places to visit and try new food... but yes, nothing can beat the old traditional games and festival and nowadays big cities do not play those kind of games anymore but small villages still play it and if you want to go far away from the noisy cities, go to villages for more peace and play old games that reminded you about your childhood. Both places have their own unique advantages and disadvantages but it's up to you, wether you like peaceful places or noisy places it's fine, i think you should try to live both places and feel the life there and just maby that is when you will know what to choose but for me i prefer both places.

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