What is your ideal job?

Everybody have their own dreams about their ideal job, the job that htey will do in the future. Nobody can stop us dreaming about it and as for my, i have one too, the job that i want to do is an English teacher. Iwant to do it because i have a passion for english, it is so interesting to study another language outside your country language. This job will help me to teach the next generation English so that they would also know English and even maybe pass the language to the next generation. I can teach it in school and also at home by making my own extra class shool. I can go to the mountain and teach them English so that everyone would know it but doing this job is not going to be easy. You have to work hard to make a living and make the students understand what you are giving them the knowledge. But it can be pay of if one of your student win an award or did something that everybody know about him or her and they would like "Wow you are a great teacher".You could get pay when you are old and doesn't work anymore because you have been working in the goverment so when you are old they will give you money to live until you pass away. So being a teacher isn't the best job ever in fact it is pretty hard but everyone have their own ideal job and for me, this is the job that i want to do in the future.

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Average: 9.5 (4 votes)
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 268 350
No. of Characters: 1036 1500
No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.866 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.952 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.444 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.444 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.238 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5