WHY I LIKE EDUCATION
If we are talking about education, we are talking about our future. How to prepare our live well, they keywords is education. There are many people think that it is not necessary to study until undergraduate or post graduate. Just think about how we can survive without study until graduate.
Actually, education is important for me, because the high competition in the world. It is impossible for me to survive without knowing anything. This era needs someone who has a knowledge. For doing something agree with their specialization.
Learning make \s me prudent too. A person with knowledge, usually see a problem on wide side. They never think to find problem solving by violence. In various region in Indonesia. Were fight causes little problem. Sometime a young man crash in the road and make them angry. Then they invite their friend to invasion other man village. So, fighting is happened.
Finally, education is requirement for us to prepare our future and face the world challenge. Who gets domination in learning will be command the earth.
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Sentence: How to prepare our live well, they keywords is education.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and keywords
Sentence: For doing something agree with their specialization.
Description: The fragment something agree with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace agree with verb, past tense
Sometime a young man crash in the road and make them angry.
Sometime a young man crashes in the road and makes them angry.
they invite their friend to invasion other man village
they invite their friend to invade other man's village
education is requirement
education is the requirement
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