The given argument has some flaws for numerous reasons, claims made by author in this argument are undermined by the assumptions, primarily, the claim is woven baskets are made only by the palean people, furthermore, the brim water is deep and broad, moreover, there are no palean boats for the transportation. These claims doenot have sufficient evidence in the argument.
Firstly, the claim written by author is woven baskets are made only by palean people is drawn by the assumption that Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea, this assumption undermines the claim because the people in village of palea might be from different villages, they ight have come to palea village to sell their woven baskets.
Moving forward, the author made a claim that brim water s deep and broad , there is no analysis that brim river is deep and broad , and also the only means of transportation is available that only boats, here no where stated an assumption that there
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s deep and broad, moreover, there are no palean boats for the transportation. The...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m because the people in village of palea might be from different villages, they i...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a claim that brim water s deep and broad , there is no analysis that brim river is...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...alysis that brim river is deep and broad , and also the only means of transportati...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tion is available that only boats, here no where stated an assumption that there ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no where stated an assumption that there
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 2260.96107784 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 441.139720559 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09550561798 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74960715488 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 204.123752495 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 705.55239521 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.458846286 57.8364921388 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.75 119.503703932 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.5 23.324526521 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.70786347227 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365401524489 0.218282227539 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190086332543 0.0743258471296 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167724045489 0.0701772020484 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233401314035 0.128457276422 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174700933293 0.0628817314937 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 14.3799401198 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 98.500998004 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.9071856287 210% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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