All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
This discussion suffers from several logial principles. firstly, the auther menssioned the immunizations as the only possible and valid way to contain the flu. However, there are other measures like lock down which can contain the diseas more effectively and outright. seconldy, the argument mentioned "a small possibility" in which the inoculation will have a fatal effect on a person, and it does not clear that how much is this "small possibility" in terms of percentage. If it is less than one percent, its is an accepable risk to take in medical viewpoint. Additionally, sometimes colateral damage is of any action can not be avoided, which have to be pa some price for a better good. finally, the writer claim that the inoculation must be done "routinely to all people". This statement has two vague claims. Primally, the routinely doesnot determined how often it sould be administered. The locals may not allow the authorities to do this like every week. Next, there is a herd immunity when over half of a population is vaccinated,. As a result it would be unnecessary to vaccinate all pepole to prevent the spread of the cow flu. In nutsell, this argument could be improved it demistefied the overgenerelized statements, and the auther was more right to the point in his/her statements.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...suffers from several logial principles. firstly, the auther menssioned the immunization...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seconldy
...e diseas more effectively and outright. seconldy, the argument mentioned 'a small p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 711, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... to be pa some price for a better good. finally, the writer claim that the inoculation ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1068, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... over half of a population is vaccinated,. As a result it would be unnecessary to ...
^^
Line 1, column 1071, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er half of a population is vaccinated,. As a result it would be unnecessary to vac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10599078341 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25460482851 2.78398813304 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.468620217663 140% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3522657955 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948451291363 0.218282227539 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316460420308 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343410899881 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948451291363 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...suffers from several logial principles. firstly, the auther menssioned the immunization...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seconldy
...e diseas more effectively and outright. seconldy, the argument mentioned 'a small p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 711, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... to be pa some price for a better good. finally, the writer claim that the inoculation ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1068, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... over half of a population is vaccinated,. As a result it would be unnecessary to ...
^^
Line 1, column 1071, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er half of a population is vaccinated,. As a result it would be unnecessary to vac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10599078341 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25460482851 2.78398813304 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.468620217663 140% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3522657955 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948451291363 0.218282227539 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316460420308 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343410899881 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948451291363 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.