An ancient, traditional remedy for insomnia — the scent of lavender flowers — has now been proved effective. In a recent study, 30 volunteers with chronic insomnia slept each night for three weeks on lavender-scented pillows in a controlled room where

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An ancient, traditional remedy for insomnia — the scent of lavender flowers — has now been proved effective. In a recent study, 30 volunteers with chronic insomnia slept each night for three weeks on lavender-scented pillows in a controlled room where their sleep was monitored electronically. During the first week, volunteers continued to take their usual sleeping medication. They slept soundly but wakened feeling tired. At the beginning of the second week, the volunteers discontinued their sleeping medication. During that week, they slept less soundly than the previous week and felt even more tired. During the third week, the volunteers slept longer and more soundly than in the previous two weeks. Therefore, the study proves that lavender cures insomnia within a short period of time.

The above given argument asserts that lavender scented pillows can cure isomnia within short period of time.In order to support the claim,a study is presented in the argument which was carried out on 30 volunteers suffering from chronic insomnia for 3 weeks in a controlled room that are monitored.However,the evidence to support the conclusion is hasn't served it's purpose as it is deprived of some important clues that need to be discussed deeply.

Firstly,there is no information regarding the body or any authority who conducted the study as the various process and methods used in study are absent as well.A study cannot be simply believed as it needs a good validation from a established authorised bodies.also it was not mentioned about any other details of the volunteers as a certain treatment would work for a people of specific age group and could be found useless for others.If in case,most of the volunteers part of study are of similar age,the result of study cannot be accurate.
Second,the study has been carried out over 3 weeks and volunteers were on medications and also using lavender scented pillows but still they appear tired.Further into second week,medication was stopped and volunteers felt slightly better and consequesntly all of them having a more sound sleep in third week gives no correlation between scented pillows and insomnia.Even though scented pillows are used every week,the sleep only got better when medication is stopped suggests that problem is more correlated with medication and other factors.
Furthermore,it is provided int the argument that study is done under controlled rooms which may not be the case with volunteers everyday.The sleeping conditions can have drastic impact on amount of number of hours they sleep.providing comfortable facilities and peaceful environment may also have done the job in curing insomnia.

Moreover,it is mentioned in the argument that scented pillow is a traditional method for curing insomnia.
This raises serious doubts regarding how effective can a ancient treatment be on millenials.Today's lifestyle is complete constrast to ancient lifestyle.The occupations,facilities,relations altogether can have substantial impact on sleep cycle.

To conclude,the argument presents a conclusion but lacks in providing sound evidence corroborating with the argument.The above questions need to be answered in order to validate the conclusion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54177897574 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47138209876 2.78398813304 125% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.245220248 57.8364921388 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.714285714 119.503703932 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 23.324526521 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5714285714 5.70786347227 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.25449101796 590% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222936138902 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114000647852 0.0743258471296 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860180667683 0.0701772020484 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114000647852 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860180667683 0.0628817314937 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 14.3799401198 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 48.3550499002 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.5979740519 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.32208582834 129% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 98.500998004 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 12.3882235529 218% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.9071856287 227% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 2010 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.089 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.789 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 151 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 30.512 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5