The young age of human being is more important since its the best time in ones life. At young age human have the power to do anything. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Competition always create problems. They tend the people to fight. Rebellious behaviour is not good. If the youngsters taught to fight or lead an organsiation with competative meantality its may create neagative impact. For an example while leading an industry if any issue occur with any other person or industry the leader may take cynical step for successing. They wont hestiate for deceiving or killing the opposite team.
If the leadership are developed with competition mentality rather than cooperation meantality it may cause harm to society.If we take examples for government sector if leaders are with compettaive menaity they wont show any kindess to others seemingly they always want to win. They wont even hestiate to kill or harm other people for their wellfare. Since they have good power they select any path to het succeed.
Insted of preparing the young leaders with competative meantality they must trained in the sense of cooperation. Unity is very essential in every sucess. The leaders must have companionship and empathy to others. If any organistion or person was in need then the opposite team must ready to help them. If they are trained with negative meantality they wont be ready to help others. A good leader must have robust and sympathic mentality.
In every field cooperation is essential rather than competition.The society is preparing the young leaders so society should taught the youngstres that without cooperation their is no survival for human being. Avoid execessive competition and healty competiton can embrace cooperatuin.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 301 350
No. of Characters: 1510 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.017 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.702 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.625 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... of human being is more important since its the best time in ones life. At young ag...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...re important since its the best time in ones life. At young age human have the power...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... society to prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fighting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fighting
...r is not good. If the youngsters taught to fight or lead an organsiation with competativ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iving or killing the opposite team. If the leadership are developed with compe...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...meantality it may cause harm to society.If we take examples for government sector ...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r harm other people for their wellfare. Since they have good power they select any pa...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... opposite team must ready to help them. If they are trained with negative meantali...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...on is essential rather than competition.The society is preparing the young leaders ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring the young leaders so society should taught the youngstres that without coope...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...the youngstres that without cooperation their is no survival for human being. Avoid e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18060200669 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81489740248 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.5533648941 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.45 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 23.324526521 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 5.70786347227 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0119167905928 0.218282227539 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00484136865928 0.0743258471296 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106594814784 0.0701772020484 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00793145793286 0.128457276422 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00429100524616 0.0628817314937 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.3550499002 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.197005988 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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