Education provide knowledge.The education given at the childhood help a child to develop a good character with manners. So its essential to provide moral and basic education in schools. A nation should require all at its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Student must be taught the basics of every field. In upper primary classes the syllabus must mostly cover the morals and good habits. If they educated well in the childhood age these morals help them to develop good characteristics. The children of a nation should teach same moral values. They must taught how to face problems,how to get succeed in future etc.Such information is important for every student in the nation.
Until the college a student must taught basics. So that after they reach the college they can choose the field which they are interested. A student must have basics knowledge about every field like mathematics, science,technology etc..The same syllabus must taught through out the country.
The curriculum also include information about the nation. They must taught with syllabus which is beneficial for the nation as well their future life. The curriculum must cover the features of every region or states of that country. The national language also want to teach. They must taught to love the nation so that they will have a good companionship to the nation. The moral values or patriotism wont differ based on regions.
Since the behavior and life is developed at the school times, the curriculum must perfect. The development of student wont change based on their places. In collage they can choose the field which they interested to purse. The interest can identify from school levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 280.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15357142857 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66886574929 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2449968588 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7142857143 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38559964987 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124679802751 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195949830265 0.0758088955206 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220304649601 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133074935452 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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