“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
The argument made in the editorial is regarding the autonomy of the country, which is undermined by the entering of illegal immigrants who endanger the country's economy and national identity.So, the conclusion is to make every effort to return these immigrants to their country of origin.
The argument relies on certain assumptions.Firstly, If the entry of illegal immigrants is seen as a threat, it assumes that the country faces no threat from its own country.It implies that the country has faced no upheavals in the past due to the firebrands in the country.
Secondly,the editorial assumes that every illegal immigrant who enters the country is a threat or a danger which may not be the case.Many such cases could crop up due to unemployment.When the motive or the objective of the immigration is unknown and not ascertained , then the link between their entering into the country and causing danger to the national identity and economy is undermined.
If the argument could justify how the immigrants are posing a threat by including information such as:
If there are many such illegal immigrants then, there is a possibility that these individuals might take away job opportunities from people of their own country, which might lead to an increase in poverty level and could impact the country's economy.Second implication of this could also be ulterior motives of disrupting the peace of the country which could endanger the national identity of the country.
Had there been a few instances to capitalise on the argument with a few statistical data such as , if any disruption has occurred in the past , then how many of them could be attributed to the illegal immigrants.These numbers could indicate the threat that these immigrants actual cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
... countrys economy and national identity.So, the conclusion is to make every effort...
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... argument relies on certain assumptions.Firstly, If the entry of illegal immigrants is ...
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...ry faces no threat from its own country.It implies that the country has faced no u...
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...the firebrands in the country. Secondly,the editorial assumes that every illegal im...
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Suggestion: Many
...t or a danger which may not be the case.Many such cases could crop up due to unemplo...
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...cases could crop up due to unemployment.When the motive or the objective of the immi...
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...migration is unknown and not ascertained , then the link between their entering in...
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...l and could impact the countrys economy.Second implication of this could also be ulter...
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Suggestion: These
...be attributed to the illegal immigrants.These numbers could indicate the threat that ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243421052632 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.148026315789 0.15541462614 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921052631579 0.0836205057962 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0296052631579 0.0520304965353 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0197368421053 0.0272364105082 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121710526316 0.125424944231 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0460526315789 0.0416121511921 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0847251307 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0296052631579 0.026700313972 111% => OK
Particles: 0.00328947368421 0.001811407834 182% => OK
Determiners: 0.167763157895 0.113004496875 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328947368421 0.0255425247493 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0263157894737 0.0127820249294 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1757.0 2731.13054187 64% => OK
No of words: 290.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05862068966 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358620689655 0.378187486979 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303448275862 0.287650121315 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213793103448 0.208842608468 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131034482759 0.135150697306 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0847251307 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 207.018472906 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479310344828 0.469332199767 102% => OK
Word variations: 46.4912890522 52.1807786196 89% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.2022227129 250% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9657712689 57.7814097925 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 351.4 141.986410481 247% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 23.2022227129 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.724660767414 331% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.58251231527 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 88.3448275862 51.9672348444 170% => OK
Elegance: 2.08333333333 1.8405768891 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528655853323 0.441005458295 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.386825340787 0.135418324435 286% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0171943185331 0.0829849096947 21% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.53996951561e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.38095586544 0.193483328276 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699263146588 0.0970749176394 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368897580082 0.42659136922 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113459475797 0.0774707102158 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349031383124 0.312017818177 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891392880401 0.0698173142475 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.33743842365 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 6.46551724138 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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