The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
From very early on in life, we are exposed to myriad choices with glimpses being given to each of it in the form of social science, maths , science,languages, computers and with age, we are to streamline our interests.But, the world is changing and so are the interests of people.Self-knowledge is becoming a very important aspect.With the startup fever gaining steam, people from all walks of life and through different age groups are being seen engaged in them.
With internet exposing an individual to a whole new world where one can learn whatever one wants to, sky is no longer the limit.Children as old as 12 or 13 years are learning programming and honing up their technical skills.People who take initiatives on their are the ones who are wanted today, they are the ones who have the urge and hence it is always advised to indulge in self knowledge since childhood.It is rightly bySTEAVE JOBS "Stay hungry, Stay foolish",over the years it creates an inquisitive and a voracious individual.So how to develop self-knowledge?
Self motivation is a big factor in this, as one has to compel oneself to move out of the comfort zone and venture into the world of unknown.This way we are able to widen our horizon and appreciate different aspects of the life.For example, whatever a person might be today, programming or the changing technology is an area that everyone must keep abreast with.This is due to the simple reason that technology has formed the basis of everything happenening around us.The time has come when we have to lay our hands on things that we don't know,by which i don't mean that we have to reject the familiar.Rejecting the familiar becomes to strong and that needn't be the case.One must continue to further their interest in the familiar but at the same time look out for the unknown.
Taking the case of startup, why is it that some of them manage to attract investors from worldwide?It is because people are being paid to come out of their cocoon and bring about novel ideas to venture into the arcane land of immense opportunity.People have to be encouraged to take the road not taken,only then can progress and advancement continue.Had Thomas Alva Edison not deviated from the familiar and not tried his hands on the unknown , then even today we might have been living in the dark.
So, what i mean to convey is that even today there are many things that seem esoteric to humans and in order for us to continue this advancement of technology we need people to motivate themselves to indulge in self-knowledge , which will come from engaging themselves with topics that are not familiar to them.Rejection of the familiar is definitely not the solution, but moving past it is definitely one way out.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'as for', 'as to', 'for example', 'i mean']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207584830339 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.205588822355 0.157235817809 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0718562874251 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479041916168 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0578842315369 0.0444667217837 130% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121756487026 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.059880239521 0.0406280797675 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00554764639 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0518962075848 0.030933414821 168% => OK
Particles: 0.00399201596806 0.0016655270985 240% => OK
Determiners: 0.0858283433134 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0139720558882 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0279441117764 0.0148568991511 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2741.0 2732.02544248 100% => OK
No of words: 471.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8195329087 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303609341826 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225053078556 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167728237792 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104033970276 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00554764639 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 219.290929204 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532908704883 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 63.2149276053 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 94.2 23.380412469 403% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 123.727119097 59.4972553346 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 548.2 141.124799967 388% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.2 23.380412469 403% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 116.705307856 51.4728631049 227% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493882216118 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.32191023205 0.123202303941 261% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762729080342 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.89510744498e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.341910413362 0.161403998019 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582847382088 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.403867903723 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0752836374153 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341910413362 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582847382088 0.0653680567796 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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