“On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Well, with the massive bunch of people blamer island is found to be prone with accidents during the summer season. As the author mentioned that the people are met with accidents with the use of mopeds in the island might not be the only reason for the accidents occurring in the island.
As the author has given an example of seaville islands, which has reduced the moped use by 50% in order to avoid accidents, this need not necessarily be the case with the blamer island too. As the island population is very high there must some means of transportation for them in order to make it easy for the population, which neglected might lead to heavy population hitting the roads. As it is summer it would be dangerous for the people to be on roads. The reasons behind the accidents in the blamer island must be considered again.
Building up, the reason behind the accidents might just not be the usage of mopeds instead it could also be the wrong usage, that is riding with high speed, rash riding etc. even the condition of the roads must be considered, which might lead to accidents. Are the pedestrians walking on the roads following proper discipline? Is also to be known as it is a huge population, people might violate the rules.
Furthermore, according to the author, rental mopeds are to be reduced which may not actually mitigate the problem as the mopeds owed by the residents are going to be the same, Which might also a be reason for the accidents taking place. The accidents reduction in the seavelle islands is not properly mentioned. Though the accidents have been reduced by 50% it is not sure that the accidents are reduced only because of the reduction of the mopeds. There might have also been many factors left unchecked. We are not sure that the reason behind them to reduce the mopeds is for the accidents or anything else.
The accident percentage has to be bought down. Steps have to be taken for the mitigation of the accidents, which has to be done through proper analysis and preventive steps as it deals with people lives. Controlling the usage of mopeds is not going to be the solution for the problem. However, this authors argument is not likely significantly persuade to trust his assertion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...found to be prone with accidents during the summer season. As the author mentioned that the peopl...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be the case with the blamer island too. As the island population is very high ther...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to heavy population hitting the roads. As it is summer it would be dangerous for ...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... going to be the same, Which might also a be reason for the accidents taking place. ...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
...son for the accidents taking place. The accidents reduction in the seavelle islands is no...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trusting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'persuade' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: trusting
...nt is not likely significantly persuade to trust his assertion.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231850117096 0.25644967241 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.19906323185 0.15541462614 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0468384074941 0.0836205057962 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0632318501171 0.0520304965353 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0257611241218 0.0272364105082 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124121779859 0.125424944231 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0725995316159 0.0416121511921 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50127908761 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374707259953 0.026700313972 140% => OK
Particles: 0.00468384074941 0.001811407834 259% => OK
Determiners: 0.131147540984 0.113004496875 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304449648712 0.0255425247493 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140515222482 0.0127820249294 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2235.0 2731.13054187 82% => OK
No of words: 392.0 446.07635468 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70153061224 6.12365571057 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323979591837 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198979591837 0.287650121315 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145408163265 0.208842608468 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107142857143 0.135150697306 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50127908761 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 207.018472906 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423469387755 0.469332199767 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.4142058709 52.1807786196 85% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6315789474 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9534528019 57.7814097925 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.631578947 141.986410481 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.724660767414 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 40.529538131 51.9672348444 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.48780487805 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470982697844 0.441005458295 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164866831749 0.135418324435 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0967466501137 0.0829849096947 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.634100326984 0.58762219726 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175026699793 0.147661913831 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237205728341 0.193483328276 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101550708939 0.0970749176394 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.603637135229 0.42659136922 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0400062737621 0.0774707102158 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374439565366 0.312017818177 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378999563947 0.0698173142475 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.87684729064 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 16.0 5.36822660099 298% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 14.657635468 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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