The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The number of mopeds that were rented on a daily basis depend upon the frequency of tourists in Balmer island. To estimate the result of the conclusion that the council should enforce restrictions on moped rentals and its consequences based on the outcome of similar rules in the town of Seaville is flawed in nature which are discussed as follows.
Firstly, is the population of Seaville and that of Balmer island similar during the summer months, when the tourist density is the highest? If so, where the frequency of moped rentals similar to the current frequency on Balmer island? If the number of tourists visting Balmer island is much more than that on Seaville then the aftereffect of the constraints imposed on the moped rentals may have a negative impact on the tourism industry of that area on the whole. For example, inadequacy of mopens to travel around the island may prove to be an impactful inconvenience to the overl experience of the tourists' holiday. On similar line of thought, the effect of the restrictions in Seaville should be research and evaluated. What was the tourists' measurement of satisfaction after limiting the the rental numbers? Dit it affect the number of returning visiters? If the influence of the rules enforced were negative, it is not advisable to the same on Balmer island.
Secondly, it is unreasonable to credit the limits on rentals to the total percent annual reduction in moped accidents. Were there other regulations that were put into action during the same time? If yes, then what were they and what was their impact on the traffic of Seaville? Do these regulations are already in play in Balmer Island or do they also have to be implemented? Even if there weren't any new policies established in Seaville, the existing traffic policies should be compared and their similarities should be calculated.
Lastly, the data on accidents should be collected for both the areas under consideration to be analyzed for patterns and trends. Were they similiar? Only if the they match to an acceptable degree, can the outcome of the proposed conclusion can be determined with certainty. Therefore, to validate the conclusion drawn by the passage is inheretly weak and unpredictable using the specified premises alone. The questions put forth in the above passages must be looked into to accurately conclude the aftermath of the proposed restriction.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 397 350
No. of Characters: 1956 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.464 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.927 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.736 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 155 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.581 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.457 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the current frequency on Balmer island? If the number of tourists visting Balmer i...
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Line 5, column 738, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...be research and evaluated. What was the tourists measurement of satisfaction after limit...
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Line 5, column 790, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...surement of satisfaction after limiting the the rental numbers? Dit it affect the numbe...
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Line 5, column 790, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...surement of satisfaction after limiting the the rental numbers? Dit it affect the numbe...
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Line 5, column 821, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...limiting the the rental numbers? Dit it affect the number of returning visiters? If t...
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Line 9, column 391, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...o have to be implemented? Even if there werent any new policies established in Seavill...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir similarities should be calculated. Lastly, the data on accidents should be ...
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Line 13, column 158, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...and trends. Were they similiar? Only if the they match to an acceptable degree, can the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 55.5748502994 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 396.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06565656566 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8077446932 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2081666664 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183637647027 0.218282227539 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609552562767 0.0743258471296 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759602596175 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109306202756 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864242036339 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 98.500998004 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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