Claitown University needs both affordable housing for its students and a way to fund the building of such housing The best solution to this problem is to commission a famous architect known for experimental and futuristic buildings It is common knowledge

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Claitown University needs both affordable housing for its students and a way to fund the building of such housing. The best solution to this problem is to commission a famous architect known for experimental and futuristic buildings. It is common knowledge that tourists are willing to pay money to tour some of the architect's buildings, so it can be expected that tourists will want to visit this new building. The income from the fees charged to tourists will soon cover the building costs. Furthermore, such a building will attract new students as well as donations from alumni. And even though such a building will be much larger than our current need for student housing, part of the building can be used as office space.

The argument proposed possible solution to meet its demand for student housing facilities and a way to fund this initiative. The author lists the methods that are purportedly suitable to bolster this initiative. The solution termed as the best one available out there is to commision sa famaous architect. The author posits that the unique style of the architect might entice more tourists. However the author fails to provide any information about the said architect's extent of fame. Without considering and evaluating the artist's fame and recognition around the world, the so called "Best" plan might falter at the very budding stages. One should rely on such a solution only when the recognition of the architect and his craft, in our purview is ubiquitous.
The commen knowldege that tourists would pay moeny to see architectural buildings depends not only on the architectural wonder itself but also on multifarious factors like ease of accessebility, cost of visit and in some cases preferences as well. It has been observed that not all people or tourists admire every architectures. Tourists have certain proclivities for certain architectures. Moreover most tourists only visit places that are already well know and have been certified my millions and millions of other previous travellers who had been there. It takes a considerable amount of time for a neophytic place of tourism to burgeon. It has to grasp the public attention and it would require immense publicity, implicitly requiring a certian amount of funds. From personal expereinces and other accounts of travel it is well known that tourism locations are made more famous by tourism companies that endorse a certain place of visit on behalf of monetary gains. Thus to get the required tourist attraction to collect profits will require initial investments that the author fail to discuss and clarify rendering the argument inchoate.

Based on the personal and fellow student accounts, the places of lodging and accommodation that offer the lowest deals in some areas have the highest student influx. Students are mostly indifferent towards such material attractions rather they focus on buttressing their savings to ease their student life. The author sheds no light on the accommodation costs he plans to charge the incomming students. A possible solution that the author fails to ponder upon is to increase the number of accommodation units within the limited space he has so as to house more students at a lower rates, thus making the same profits as he plans to. The author considers that alumni donations will help crowd source his project but he makes no prognosis of the amount he might receive. Thus either the alumni donation predictions must be specified to support the argument or the author must have carrried out surveys to judge the number of alumnis willing to help out and in what capacity. Without this estimation a the plan is at a huge chance of faltering.

The use of the leftover space as office space suggests that the project can be reconsidered and rather than profligate spendings, can be accommodated within a much smaller budget. The office space is proposed only because the leftover space is more than required. Rather this extra space should have been utilised to increase the accommodation capacities, enhancing the profits at hand. Thus the above reasons stated evinces the flaws and the weaknesses the author's arguments and must be pondered upon before proceeding with a project that might have a huge potential.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly suitable to bolster this initiative. The solution termed as the best one availab...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e is to commision sa famaous architect. The author posits that the unique style of ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e architect might entice more tourists. However the author fails to provide any informa...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
... Without considering and evaluating the artists fame and recognition around the world, ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...proclivities for certain architectures. Moreover most tourists only visit places that ar...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...e of visit on behalf of monetary gains. Thus to get the required tourist attraction ...
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Suggestion: to
...n units within the limited space he has so as to house more students at a lower rates, t...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ognosis of the amount he might receive. Thus either the alumni donation predictions ...
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... what capacity. Without this estimation a the plan is at a huge chance of faltering. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...e leftover space is more than required. Rather this extra space should have been utili...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...acities, enhancing the profits at hand. Thus the above reasons stated evinces the fl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2962.0 2260.96107784 131% => OK
No of words: 573.0 441.139720559 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16928446771 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79858808079 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 204.123752495 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51832460733 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 934.2 705.55239521 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0302874447 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0384615385 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13798155501 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379678422075 0.0743258471296 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578202167732 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796228506765 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688364362406 0.0628817314937 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 98.500998004 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly suitable to bolster this initiative. The solution termed as the best one availab...
^^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e is to commision sa famaous architect. The author posits that the unique style of ...
^^^
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e architect might entice more tourists. However the author fails to provide any informa...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
... Without considering and evaluating the artists fame and recognition around the world, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...proclivities for certain architectures. Moreover most tourists only visit places that ar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 970, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e of visit on behalf of monetary gains. Thus to get the required tourist attraction ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n units within the limited space he has so as to house more students at a lower rates, t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 770, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ognosis of the amount he might receive. Thus either the alumni donation predictions ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 998, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... what capacity. Without this estimation a the plan is at a huge chance of faltering. ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 265, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...e leftover space is more than required. Rather this extra space should have been utili...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 388, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...acities, enhancing the profits at hand. Thus the above reasons stated evinces the fl...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2962.0 2260.96107784 131% => OK
No of words: 573.0 441.139720559 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16928446771 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79858808079 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 204.123752495 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51832460733 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 934.2 705.55239521 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0302874447 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0384615385 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13798155501 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379678422075 0.0743258471296 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578202167732 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796228506765 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688364362406 0.0628817314937 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 98.500998004 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.