Grades are important measure while analyse the learning at school level. In schools teacher understand the capability of a student on the basis of the grades. Parents are so much concerned about grades of exams because grades are basis for admission in higher studies. Students performance not only depends on homework given by teachers, but also on others factors also like family status, background, mental capability, grasping power, practice__etc.
Furthermore, in the argument it is explained that In Sanlee teachers reported daily homework where as in Marlee teachers reported no more than two or three days per week homework. In the given argument it is not clear weather the homework checked daily in Sanlee. By giving daily homework is not sufficient to enhance learning and grades. to increase grades teachers has to checked daily homework and explain mistakes to students. Probably in Marlee it is easy to check homework for teachers because it is not daily work.
However, Only math and science subject does not calculate the overall grades. Overall grades depends on performance of all subjects. The research shows that the homework pattern in two subjects math and science affect overall grades, which is not truly correct. For example if a student score B grade in math and science but D in other two subjects and C in one than overall grade can not be B.
Only giving homework is not sufficient. It is also important to check that students complete their homework willfully or not. If students only copied the homework from classwork than the learning is not properly done It is important to analyse students sincerer in homework.If at school level teacher build habit of willfully completing homework in student than the students achieve zenith in future.
conclusively, to enhance the overall grades of students teachers should give homework as per their convenience, so that teachers can check the homework as well as analyse the sincerity of students. The homework should be given in all subjects.
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- The data from a survey of high school math and science teachers show that in the district of Sanlee many of these teachers reported assigning daily homework, whereas in the district of Marlee, most science and math teachers reported assigning homework no 30
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1656 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.003 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.536 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.471 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.924 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.378 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Grades are important measure while analy...
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...lity, grasping power, practice__etc. Furthermore, in the argument it is expla...
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...Sanlee teachers reported daily homework where as in Marlee teachers reported no more tha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ficient to enhance learning and grades. to increase grades teachers has to checked...
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...teachers because it is not daily work. However, Only math and science...
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...one than overall grade can not be B. Only giving homework is not sufficient. ...
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...mplete their homework willfully or not. If students only copied the homework from ...
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...o analyse students sincerer in homework.If at school level teacher build habit of ...
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...o analyse students sincerer in homework.If at school level teacher build habit of ...
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Suggestion: in the future
...tudent than the students achieve zenith in future. conclusively, to enhance ...
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... achieve zenith in future. conclusively, to enhance the overall grades of stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 329.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68007211836 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45896656535 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7103088893 57.8364921388 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29087314253 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103760980893 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758038390571 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16446267665 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781905523487 0.0628817314937 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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