The editor write a letter from the owner of skate shop in central plaza he thinks two year ago the city council voted to prohibit skateboarding in central plaza. But may be the skateboarding at that time are not usually usefull and then may be its manufacture its wasteful. Second one he claimed that skateboard users were responsible for litter and vandalism that were keeping other visitors from coming to the plaza. But may be not all visitors are responsible. May be some vulgur peoples are only responsible to the litter and vandalism. Third one is past two year, the litter and vandalism are still problematic and that time has been only a small number of visitors are increase in central plaza. May be all over city in growing to the vandalism and littering then the visitors are not responsible to this vandalism and littering. Then skateboarding is only permitted to the Monroe park, however there is no problem with litter or vandalism there.
The editor write a letter from the owner of skate shop in central plaza he thinks two year ago the city council voted to prohibit skateboarding in central plaza. But may be the skateboarding at that time are not usually usefull and then may be its manufacture its wasteful. Second one he claimed that skateboard users were responsible for litter and vandalism that were keeping other visitors from coming to the plaza. But may be not all visitors are responsible. May be some vulgur peoples are only responsible to the litter and vandalism. Third one is past two year, the litter and vandalism are still problematic and that time has been only a small number of visitors are increase in central plaza. May be all over city in growing to the vandalism and littering then the visitors are not responsible to this vandalism and littering. Then skateboarding is only permitted to the Monroe park, however there is no problem with litter or vandalism there.
First of all the central plaza he thinks two year ago the city council voted to prohibit skateboarding in central plaza. But may be the skateboarding at that time are not usually usefull and then may be its manufacture its wasteful. Then May be after two year the overall condition is good. May be the City peoples are using the skateboarding is only fun and unhelpfull. Than the city council after the marking the situation the prohibits the skateboarding in central plaza.
Second one is he claimed that skateboard users were responsible for litter and vandalism that were keeping other visitors from coming to the plaza. But may be not all visitors are responsible. May be some vulgur peoples are only responsible to the litter and vandalism. May be central plaza workers are not cleaning to skateboard and then peoples are not used them. May be other peoples are responsible to the vandalism. Then this reason are skateboarding are prohibit in central plaza.
Third one is past two year, the litter and vandalism are still problematic and that time has been only a small number of visitors are increase in central plaza. May be all over city in growing to the vandalism and littering then the visitors are not responsible to this vandalism and littering. May be at that time peoples are responsible to the city. May be at that time vandalism and litters are decreasing to the city and city plaza. So Then the skateboarding is only permitted to the Monroe park, however there is no problem with litter or vandalism there.
So, then the past two year the ago situation are different and at that time the situation are change. May be some statement are premises and some are true. In order to restore central plaza to its former glory, then we recommend that the city lift its prohibition on skateboarding in the plaza. Than at that time the skateboard are useful to the central plaza. Not only to the park. Than all over situation the skateboard are not prohibit to the central plaza at that time.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 513 350
No. of Characters: 2401 1500
No. of Different Words: 122 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.759 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.68 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.641 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.595 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'writes'.
Suggestion: writes
The editor write a letter from the owner of skate shop i...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at that time are not usually usefull and then may be its manufacture its wasteful...
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Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...e not all visitors are responsible. May be some vulgur peoples are only responsibl...
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Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...problematic and that time has been only a small number of visitors are increase in central plaza....
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Line 1, column 708, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tors are increase in central plaza. May be all over city in growing to the vandali...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blem with litter or vandalism there. First of all the central plaza he thinks...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at that time are not usually usefull and then may be its manufacture its wasteful...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... its manufacture its wasteful. Then May be after two year the overall condition is...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...year the overall condition is good. May be the City peoples are using the skateboa...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...ateboarding is only fun and unhelpfull. Than the city council after the marking the ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...e not all visitors are responsible. May be some vulgur peoples are only responsibl...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ard and then peoples are not used them. May be other peoples are responsible to the...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prohibited'.
Suggestion: prohibited
... Then this reason are skateboarding are prohibit in central plaza. Third one is past...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ohibit in central plaza. Third one is past two year, the litter and vandalism ...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...problematic and that time has been only a small number of visitors are increase in central plaza....
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tors are increase in central plaza. May be all over city in growing to the vandali...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...le to this vandalism and littering. May be at that time peoples are responsible to...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me peoples are responsible to the city. May be at that time vandalism and litters a...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...eoples are responsible to the city. May be at that time vandalism and litters are ...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter or vandalism there. So, then the past two year the ago situation are diff...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...that time the situation are change. May be some statement are premises and some ar...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...hibition on skateboarding in the plaza. Than at that time the skateboard are useful ...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hibition on skateboarding in the plaza. Than at that time the skateboard are useful ...
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Line 9, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...he central plaza. Not only to the park. Than all over situation the skateboard are n...
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Line 9, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he central plaza. Not only to the park. Than all over situation the skateboard are n...
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Line 9, column 433, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prohibited'.
Suggestion: prohibited
...l over situation the skateboard are not prohibit to the central plaza at that time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, third, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 58.0 19.6327345309 295% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 11.1786427146 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 513.0 441.139720559 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78752436647 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68417584324 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.245614035088 0.468620217663 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 19.7664670659 152% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7941003533 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8666666667 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.25449101796 495% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.634295076124 0.218282227539 291% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226122153171 0.0743258471296 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146891539918 0.0701772020484 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.466513082062 0.128457276422 363% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141909211009 0.0628817314937 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.32208582834 73% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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