"In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detect employees' Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits."
The recommendation made by vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries for achieving high productivity is laudable but the idea to achieve this is not in a proper way. Vice President tries to achieve high productivity by restricting the employees solely to the office work. Productivity has nothing to do with the amount of hours spent by the individual rather it is all about the concentration and creativity that one posses.
The idea of implementing the electronic monitoring of employees internet usage would not contribute much towards enhancing productivity. The employees shall not be restricted to the office work only the reason being, employee cannot sit idle when the work got completed.
However, the time spent by the employees on their personal use might be very less than the time taken to implement the software and then checking its compatibility and installing it on workstations. Restricting the employees to the office work might affect the productivity of the company as many would leave the company where this stage might be the crucial one.
In fact, the cost incurred on establishing software on workstations to monitor internet usage can be also high and there is no concern raised by the vice president on the cost structure in implementing it. Implementing a change in the well-established organisation might face consequences when the change is not evaluated from several aspects.
On the contrary, In the case of startups where the company itself is not completely on its ground and has a prodigious amount of work to be done in a short span of time, implementing such change would suffice. However, the vice president of the company does not claim the company’s status. The time period of releasing products in the case of startups is irregular and as the company itself is running out of time implementing the internet usage monitors would make the employees confined to the work.
The vice president of the company should take the above-elaborated factors into consideration which have a profound effect on the company and should make a compelling decision or recommendation.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1752 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.078 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.099 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.919 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.708 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ble but the idea to achieve this is not in a proper way. Vice President tries to achieve high p...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one poss', 'one posse', 'a poss', 'a posse', or simply 'posses'?
Suggestion: one poss; one posse; a poss; a posse; posses
...t the concentration and creativity that one posses. The idea of implementing the elec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, well, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2347826087 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16203056644 2.78398813304 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8860803826 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.923076923 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208286494049 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777703018131 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068208144242 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108590112978 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728683977046 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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