Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by 30 percent. Potential employers, looking at this dramatic rise in grades, believe that grades at Omega are inflated and do not accurately reflect student achievement; as a result, Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professors.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument
Previously Omega University included teachers’ evaluation for the sake of effective teaching, but the result did not follow according to the goal. They found that teachers of Omega University are assigning higher grades for getting a good impact in their evaluation procedure, consequently they found that the University is losing its fame and students are not getting enough jobs compared to other universities. Therefore, they argued to terminate the teachers’ evaluation procedure for securing students better jobs and success.
According to the evidence, I am going to argue firstly on the assumption that students are getting higher grades due to the imposing of “Evaluation Procedure” among the professors. There can be other reasons for getting a higher grade. Likewise, A professor can emphasize on the course work more vigorously if there are evaluation criteria on his performance. Therefore, A professor will earnestly work on students’ needs and make them understand the topic to get better results.
Besides, their passage compared the success of students’ from Omega university getting a job to the students’ of Alpha University, where there is no evidence or statement about that Alpha University is doing a better performance just because they don't have imposed the “ Evaluation Criteria for Professors”. Maybe Alpha University can have a different curriculum that makes their students more competent for the practical job world. That's why they are doing better securing positions in the job market.
Moreover, Current students of Omega University may be more meritorious than the previous one, which ultimately increased their grade. But This can be also true that Alpha University’s students are more brighter than Omega university which actually secure their job position ahead.
So to conclude, the argument is weakened due to lack of proper evidence and they should not terminate the Evaluation Procedure of Professors based on fallible evidence.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 304 350
No. of Characters: 1628 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.176 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.355 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.389 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
Previously Omega University included teachers evaluation for the sake of effective te...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...a University are assigning higher grades for getting a good impact in their evalu...
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... their evaluation procedure consequently they found that the University is losing...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
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... Therefore they argued to terminate the teachers evaluation procedure for securing stude...
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...needs and make them understand the topic to get better results Besides their ...
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...erstand the topic to get better results Besides their passage compared the succe...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...uccess of students from Omega university getting a job to the students of Alpha...
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...nts from Omega university getting a job to the students of Alpha University whe...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... the Evaluation Criteria for Professors Maybe Alpha University can have a differ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...securing positions in the job market Moreover Current students of Omega University ma...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...eir job position ahead So to conclude the argument is weakened due to lack of ...
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...of Professors based on fallible evidence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 303.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42574257426 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75533483956 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 19.7664670659 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 303.0 22.8473053892 1326% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 57.8364921388 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1644.0 119.503703932 1376% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 303.0 23.324526521 1299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 5.70786347227 1787% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344082174805 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.344082174805 0.0743258471296 463% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194553867046 0.128457276422 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589299652646 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 155.6 14.3799401198 1082% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -252.99 48.3550499002 -523% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.1628742515 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 123.8 12.197005988 1015% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 12.5979740519 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.42 8.32208582834 269% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 12.3882235529 476% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.2 11.1389221557 1106% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 124.0 11.9071856287 1041% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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