Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by 30 percent. Potential employers, looking at this dramatic rise in grades, believe that grades at Omega are inflated and do not accurately reflect student achievement; as a result, Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professors.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
It seem that by Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professors to enable its graduate to secure better jobs.
It is stated that since the time, new procedure have encouraged students to evaluate teachers, Omega's overall students grades increased by thirty percent but it is not information provided is not compplete. While the overall percentage is increased, but it is not pass fail ratio is not mentioned. Maybe there is a group of students with high numbers and a group with low numbers that would have affected total number of placements.
Rise is not dramatic, as there have been fifteen years , there are lot of other factors that can result in increase of average grades. During past ten years, average grades in all the schools in the state has incresed by 25 percent due to introduction of new teaching curriculum. Students performance should be compared with other college students's on a particular year, rather than comparing performance between two different time periods. Companies now give same weightage to extra curriculum activities as grades.
Moreover, Omega university is situated far away from city, which makes it difficult for recruiters and students to reach each other. While, Alpha university is situated in the middle of city where number of companies is situated. Which makes it easier for students and companies to interact.
Furthermore, Alpha provides internship oppurtunities and practical courses that are more aligned with the work that companies do on regular basis. In a survey it was found that companies prefer students with internships over other students. Omega university does not provide any such facility. As it is situated far from city, it further makes it difficult for students to find internship.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1453 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.152 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.715 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.199 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
It seem that by Omega University should termina...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...amatic, as there have been fifteen years , there are lot of other factors that can...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iters and students to reach each other. While, Alpha university is situated in the mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 282.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2695035461 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7925793041 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.468620217663 126% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6766934106 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.70786347227 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237772342771 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744940389843 0.0743258471296 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081433333829 0.0701772020484 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129531703445 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573541403027 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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