Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our granparents were childrens. Technology advancement has made life easier and more comfortable.
In last century there have been significant number of useful innovations in science. Improvement in roads, railways and airways had made travel much cheaper and easier. People can easily communicate between different places. A century ago, there is only a limted number of vehicles while today everyone ones a car or a motorcycle.
Today people have better houses that are equipped with better facilities. Houses today have inbuilt air conditioner and heaters. We have gysers and heating rod. Scientic advancements have provided people with solution to almost every problem , If we feel hot we can switch on air conditioner, if we feel cold we can switch on heater.
Advancement in computer filed has made life even more easier . In classical movies, people waiting in long lines cnan be seen. people nowadays can do banking transactions, book tickets, purchase clothes from anywhere, there is no need to wait in long queues or travel to different places.
Computers and mobiles have made people more self dependent and connected. People can easily communicate with each other.
Entertainment sources have also increased. There are number of cinemas, theaters and a abundance of other activities to choose from. This provides relaxation and enjoyement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le with solution to almost every problem , If we feel hot we can switch on air con...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nt in computer filed has made life even more easier . In classical movies, people waiting i...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ter filed has made life even more easier . In classical movies, people waiting in ...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ple waiting in long lines cnan be seen. people nowadays can do banking transactions, b...
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Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ere are number of cinemas, theaters and a abundance of other activities to choose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 222.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39189189189 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83066695015 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9261859644 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.05555555556 5.45110844103 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133419442331 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471848720095 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802394373941 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820092095296 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104503982373 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.1575268817 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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