TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Differences between the life nowadays and the life decades ago are always debated and looked at from different aspects. That is, people argue about what kind of lifestyle is better, now or in the past. However, what is of no doubt is that the contemporary life is easier in terms of many things, including education, transportation and also communication. We also see that the world now live more peacefully than ever before.
In this context, if we look at the aspect of education, we can clearly see that the education now is attainable for larger percentages of people. That is it is not very expensive as compared to the cost of it decades ago. Also, it is even more available in larger areas and sometimes supported by the countries or by organizations that are mainly concerned about education. Consequently, as the education is more feasible for more people at less costs, this makes the life of more people more easy, as the educated person usually faces less obstacles in finding jobs or managing his life. So as we can see, this is an important factor that makes the life easier for the newer generations.
Furthermore, when someone thinks about the difficulties faced in the past by traders, students, or employees because of the limited availability of transportation, he will definitely realizes the privilege people nowadays have. That is, people name difficultly face any obstacles when thinking about travelling any distance for their jobs or education. This advancement in the transportation and the affordable prices it is available at, absolutely facilitated many things for people and made their life easier.
Moreover, the advancements made in the field of communication during the last few decades, made the life easier for people in many aspects. First, people now can contact each other using handy devices in seconds regardless of how distant they are. Something that was a problem in the past. Second, now it is easier for anyone anywhere in the world to be up to date about what is going on around the world, which of course increases the public awareness of the life around them. Third, now the information about almost any topic is accessible from anywhere in the world and can be read by someone who is interested in something without even bothering to search for a resource that can provide him the information he is looking for in libraries that may be far from him, which was the case in the past.
In conclusion, it is obvious that these facts mentioned above helped the new generations to have a life much easier than the lives of the older generations and thus, the statement looks very convicing and plausible,</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun costs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ion is more feasible for more people at less costs, this makes the life of more peop...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun obstacles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y, as the educated person usually faces less obstacles in finding jobs or managing h...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'realize'
Suggestion: realize
...y of transportation, he will definitely realizes the privilege people nowadays have. Tha...
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Line 7, column 457, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding life'?
Suggestion: the surrounding life
...ourse increases the public awareness of the life around them. Third, now the information about almos...
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Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ement looks very convicing and plausible,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, third, thus, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0110864745 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1611876268 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505543237251 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1138934302 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0555555556 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993657705239 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344569867192 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251390007683 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606315586149 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015816464986 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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