The health magazine putforth a statement that experts claimed physical fitness level is getting reduced half when compared to twenty years ago.The reason they tried to establish for this is the usage of computer and later it was found mistaken that is not the usage of the computer ,fitness got reduced but because of the less usage of physical equipment by the individuals.The excerpts believe that if the usage has to previous stage,then fitness level can be improved.
While the usage of equiment,promotes the fitness of human but it is not the only factor should be considered or taken into fact.The assumptions of the experts are blunt and it calls into many question before warranting the statement.
First of all, who are these experts?Are they recognized across globe or even they widely recognized across the country?What are the standards of the claim and how reliable it is?.Medical experts are generic term,now a days more physician and dietitian have aroused to look upon these factors.Whether the experts belong to these categories has to be verified.
And second most important thing is ,one quarter of now may be equal to the one half of the population before twenty years.With fractions ,we cannot say the number got reduced.May be before 20 years,the population were 1 lakh and now it is 2 lakh .So ,in botn the cases the number remain same.The point to be noted importantly is "meet the standards then defined".Who defined the standards?Whether it is global?Any other country which met the standard is not defined inthis assumption.
The usage of the computers before 20 years cant be compared equally now.That was era everyone was fascinated and simply bought and used for hobbies whereas it is not the situation we have right now.
One really has to agree upon the fact, the physical fitness can be improved in many ways,by running,jogging and even by walking.Many smartphones have app that tell us how much calories that individual burn by doing physical activities.One need not to completely depend upon fitness equiments for improving fitness.Thus it makes the conclusion made by the experts is completely invalid.
By considering all this factors,there are many factors apart from equipment determine the fitness of human.This conclusion is agreed partly .
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The health magazine putforth a statement that experts claimed physical fitness level is getting reduced half when compared to twenty years ago.The reason they tried to establish for this is the usage of computer and later it was found mistaken that is not the usage of the computer ,fitness got reduced but because of the less usage of physical equipment by the individuals.The excerpts believe that if the usage has to previous stage,then fitness level can be improved.
Error: putforth Suggestion: purport
Sentence: While the usage of equiment,promotes the fitness of human but it is not the only factor should be considered or taken into fact.The assumptions of the experts are blunt and it calls into many question before warranting the statement.
Error: equiment Suggestion: equipment
Sentence: And second most important thing is ,one quarter of now may be equal to the one half of the population before twenty years.With fractions ,we cannot say the number got reduced.May be before 20 years,the population were 1 lakh and now it is 2 lakh .So ,in botn the cases the number remain same.The point to be noted importantly is 'meet the standards then defined'.Who defined the standards?Whether it is global?Any other country which met the standard is not defined inthis assumption.
Error: botn Suggestion: both
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: lakh Suggestion: lash
Error: inthis Suggestion: inches
Sentence: One really has to agree upon the fact, the physical fitness can be improved in many ways,by running,jogging and even by walking.Many smartphones have app that tell us how much calories that individual burn by doing physical activities.One need not to completely depend upon fitness equiments for improving fitness.Thus it makes the conclusion made by the experts is completely invalid.
Error: equiments Suggestion: equipment
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1862 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.702 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.419 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.708 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.459 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... half when compared to twenty years ago.The reason they tried to establish for this...
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...en that is not the usage of the computer ,fitness got reduced but because of the l...
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...f physical equipment by the individuals.The excerpts believe that if the usage has ...
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...f physical equipment by the individuals.The excerpts believe that if the usage has ...
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...should be considered or taken into fact.The assumptions of the experts are blunt an...
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
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Suggestion: This
...quipment determine the fitness of human.This conclusion is agreed partly .
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Suggestion: .
...f human.This conclusion is agreed partly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, then, thus, whereas, while, apart from, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 371.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22371967655 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05248061046 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.124717807 57.8364921388 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.857142857 119.503703932 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 23.324526521 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 5.70786347227 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 5.25449101796 818% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180134470157 0.218282227539 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681446222063 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487446110211 0.0701772020484 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681446222063 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487446110211 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 14.3799401198 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.3550499002 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.197005988 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.32208582834 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 12.3882235529 218% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.9071856287 202% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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