The President of Plexma Motors in his letter raised some points to support the proposition to cite the company's manufacturing firm in Canbury. These points uses two independent surveys to suggest that majority of the residents of Canbury are interested in purchasing a self driving vehicle and eqaly the trust in the car's safety. Though they appear valid based on the statistics backing them, several questions need be answered to fleshen these suggestions.
the first suggestion states that 60percent of the residents are willingly to purchase a self driving vehicle based on a survey by a local media. niw, the question of the authenticity of these analysis comes in handy, considering the total population of the residents of Canbury. where the total population is 3million, and the survey only covered 50 respondents, that dataset is too small to show a proper representation of a cross section of the residents. Hence, the survey will be highly flawed or misleading. The local media that carried out ht survey is also to be questioned and checked for unbiased, where they media outlet was hired by Plexma, then one is supposed to perceive the bias in the report as it would definitely tend to favor Plexma Motors.
Another suggestion made by the President of Plexma Motors is the after test survey results showing the residents reported in the affirmative about the safety of the cars. this raises the question on what the survey questionnaire asked. in a case where the question was 'do you find the car's no accident slate a safety criteria that has been satisfied?' then the survey's result will be highly flawed. this is because it didn't take into consideration the other key parts of the car that bothers on safety. were there considerations of obstructions o the road? where they situations where passer-bys were excluded from the roads while the car tested, these and other questions would show the details of which the survey covered the entirety of the test, to give the people a good overview of the test so as to guarantee a well thought out answer to the survey.
Finally the President of Plexma Motors claims that the manufacturing firm will lead to job creation in the city, in as much as this sounds true to an extent, at what cost will this be? will there be severe implications associated with citing the manufacturing firm? how will this sit with environmental enthusiasts in the city? Though more jobs will be created, environmentally, the city may suffer pollutions from large plants, noise pollution and other environmental implications associated with a manufacturing firm in the middle of a residential area.
Having answered the above questions, then and only then can the claims raised by Mr President have sufficient grounds. the claims raised seem valid but considering the concerns listed above, the claims lack sufficient justification and leave many unanswered questions. Going by this, the President fails to make a convincing case for proposing the citing of the company's manufacturing firm in Canbury.
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 504 350
No. of Characters: 2494 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.738 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.948 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.838 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 175 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.116 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... answered to fleshen these suggestions. the first suggestion states that 60perce...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...red to fleshen these suggestions. the first suggestion states that 60percent ...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
...ng vehicle based on a survey by a local media. niw, the question of the authenticity ...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Niw
...cle based on a survey by a local media. niw, the question of the authenticity of th...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this analysis' or 'these analyses'?
Suggestion: this analysis; these analyses
...iw, the question of the authenticity of these analysis comes in handy, considering the total p...
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Suggestion: Where
...population of the residents of Canbury. where the total population is 3million, and t...
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Suggestion:
...small to show a proper representation of a cross section of the residents. Hence,...
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...firmative about the safety of the cars. this raises the question on what the survey ...
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Suggestion: In
...on what the survey questionnaire asked. in a case where the question was do you fi...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...asked. in a case where the question was do you find the cars no accident slate a s...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
...ind the cars no accident slate a safety criteria that has been satisfied? then the surve...
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...afety criteria that has been satisfied? then the surveys result will be highly flawe...
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...e surveys result will be highly flawed. this is because it didnt take into considera...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ll be highly flawed. this is because it didnt take into consideration the other key p...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Were
...arts of the car that bothers on safety. were there considerations of obstructions o ...
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Suggestion: Where
...siderations of obstructions o the road? where they situations where passer-bys were e...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the people a good overview of the test so as to guarantee a well thought out answer to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...l thought out answer to the survey. Finally the President of Plexma Motors claims t...
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...o an extent, at what cost will this be? will there be severe implications associated...
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Suggestion: How
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...y Mr President have sufficient grounds. the claims raised seem valid but considerin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 55.5748502994 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2545.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 503.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05964214712 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88121713911 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 204.123752495 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506958250497 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 705.55239521 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9029313349 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.681818182 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8636363636 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126872954156 0.218282227539 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360241601054 0.0743258471296 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377788353349 0.0701772020484 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740114084878 0.128457276422 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351138203539 0.0628817314937 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.3799401198 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 98.500998004 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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