The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The argument that reducing the number of mopeds leads to lesser accidents appears to be plausible in the first sight.However on deeper analysis we find that it does not depend only on one factor,they are several other factors also which are to be considered along with this factor that helps us in deciding whether by reducing the number of mopeds will leads to lesser accidents or not.
First of all it tells that reducing the number of mopeds will leads to lesser accidents in the town.However one cannot assume it to be true and blindly and follow it ,other factors must also be considered.Like for example by reducing the number of mopeds then lesser mopeds will transport the huge problem,this may leads to reduction in number of people visiting the town .When few mopeds are available they may drive more recklessly or they may drive in hurry to transport people from one area to other and this may also leads to accidents.
Also reducing the number of mopeds will not guarantee that there will be no more accidents or this will leads to lesser accidents.For example If people drive carelessly and if pedestrians also do not cooperate then still there will be chances of accidents.If people do not follow safety rules or drive without precaution then no matter how many vehicles you increase or decrease there will be chances of accidents.Thus following of safety rules and proper amendment of them is absolutely necessary.
Also nothing it is not sure that only by reducing the number of rentals the neighbouring town of Seaville achieved reduction in accidents by 50%.There can be other factors also which contributed to reduction in accidents.Like for example there may be more strict rules than in the present town or there is more heavy penalty in breaking the law and so on.May be there is not that much amount of people who visit this town than the town Seaville.It is not clearly given that only by reducing the number of mopeds hired leads to lesser accidents.You cannot tell if a thing is successful in one area it will also be successful in the other area.
Things may be completely different in one area than in other.Comparison of two things can only happen if all the other external factors are same for both of them.Also it would be wise to think that along with the reduction in number of mopeds, traffic rules are also followed equally and there is a strict and correct implementation of traffic rules.Hence the other factors which are discussed in above passage must also be considered In evaluating whether reducing the number of mopeds will leads to lesser accidents.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 461 350
No. of Characters: 2120 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.634 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.599 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.363 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 57.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 35.78 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.534 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.746 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.22 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 445.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8606741573 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72962028784 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38202247191 0.468620217663 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 22.8473053892 390% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7075862751 57.8364921388 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 432.6 119.503703932 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 23.324526521 382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 5.70786347227 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.25449101796 780% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103884574522 0.218282227539 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768422904337 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237307449325 0.0701772020484 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768422904337 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237307449325 0.0628817314937 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.0 14.3799401198 320% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.4 48.3550499002 -22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 12.197005988 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.32208582834 129% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 11.1389221557 338% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.9071856287 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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