In this editorial, author concludes that by a letter to the editor of a national newspaper on corporate downsizing in Elthyria maintains that the majority of competent workers are not working anymore they are in category of jobless people and this is all because of economic crisis in the companies. In several respects, however the reasons for loosing the jobs is not that appropriate.
First of all the reason of loosing the jobs for majority of competent workers is because of economic hardship is not the only reason for all. However, the reason can also be that the company is not getting enough number of projects so that those bunch of people can work on their experienced field. The other reason could be the company require more hard working and more experienced workers for the projects with good technical skills.
In conclusion, the editorial has not convinced me with the reasons. To better evaluate the argument i would need more information but as if now there are more reasons that the competent workers have lost their jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...this editorial, author concludes that by a letter to the editor of a national new...
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Suggestion: losing the
...veral respects, however the reasons for loosing the jobs is not that appropriate. First ...
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Suggestion: losing the
...ropriate. First of all the reason of loosing the jobs for majority of competent workers ...
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...easons. To better evaluate the argument i would need more information but as if n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 441.139720559 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9209039548 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58118522323 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 204.123752495 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4297471976 57.8364921388 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.70786347227 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192149029283 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794383743258 0.0743258471296 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898089564555 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137527891266 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824566264953 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 98.500998004 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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