According to a twenty-year study, over the past twenty years, headache has been ameliorated by processed food that contains salicylates, which is a chemical substance categorized in the same group with aspirin. Hence, the author of the article assumes that with more and more salicylates being added to the food, less people will suffer from headache. However, the assumption is fallacious for several reasons.
First of all, the statement relies on the erroneous assumption that salicylate has the similar effect over headache, since these two substances are in the same chemical family group. However, sometimes substances in same chemical family group can have completely distinct influence on human body. Take methanol and ethanol for example. These two substances are similar in their chemical structures and are categorized in the same group. Yet, ethanol is also known as alcohol, which is innocuous to human if not to drink excessively. On the contrary, methanol can cause blindness or even death to those who mistakenly ingest it. As a result, medical research and chemical evidence should be provided to substantiate the assumption that salicylates is a prescription to headache just like aspirin.
Moreover, the twenty-year study mentioned in the article shows a correlation between the salicylates used in food processing and a decline in average number of headache that has reported. However, the statement is unpersuasive by taking correlation as causation, several reasons will also mitigate headache such as: people are becoming more aware of their diet and health, people who suffer from headache might find new treatment to relieve their agony, a new medicine which is more effective than aspirin is now widely accepted etc… Therefore, to strengthen the argument that salicylates in the processed food is the primary factor that cause the declination, other factors should be excluded.
In addition, even if salicylate is truly effective to ameliorate headache, and the twenty-year study that the decline in number of headache attributes to the salicylate contained in food is credible, is it plausible to make conclusion that more salicylate in food will lead to less headache? For aspirin, the medicine for headache, there is a limited dose that an individual is able to take every day, otherwise, it will be ineffective or even cause negative effects. The same logic goes for salicylates, after all, salicylate is a chemical substance instead of a panacea. The supposition in the article is too sanguine, however, experiment could be conducted to study how much salicylate is capable of being absorbed by human body and will not cause side effects.
In sum, to evaluate the credibility of the argument, more medical evidence and research should be made. The author has a positive perspective over salicylate, nevertheless, several questions are needed to be answered beforehand.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- duplicated to argument 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2384 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.217 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.858 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 155 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 117 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.475 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.037 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re salicylates being added to the food, less people will suffer from headache. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, after all, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38074398249 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94171995971 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474835886214 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 705.55239521 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.22255489022 213% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.002696836 57.8364921388 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.611111111 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.70786347227 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210951671994 0.218282227539 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660896680888 0.0743258471296 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550776491966 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115551167899 0.128457276422 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591309399751 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.3550499002 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 98.500998004 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.