The author of the editorial has made a put forward an argument that every effort must be made to return the immigrant to their country. He has made this conclusion based on the illegal immigrants which can be a threat to the economy and national identity.I completely agree with the author that illegal immigrants can be a threat to the nation.But the author in his argument has failed to consider a number of aspects which can affect his conclusion.
Firstly,the author mentions that if the number of illegal immigrants entering the country cannot be checked then it can be a threat to the national identity and economy.But he fails to explain how it can be the threat to national identity and economy. The author over here also fails to mention about the threat on the citizens. There is a possibility that the illegal immigrants may be terrorists and carry out a carry attack. This is a very important point which not only strengthens the argument but important aspect about illegal immigrants.
Secondly, the author even fails to mention that how can the autonomy of the country be affected by illegal immigrants.Attacking the autonomy of any country very difficult because for this the attackers needs the support of a number of countries which not possible easily. So author should how can illegal immigrants affects the autonomy of any country.
Finally, Authors failed to mention what kind of efforts should be made to return the criminal to their own country.Some of the illegal don't even have a passport than how to make out from which country he belongs.Thus the author should clear all the aspects above before making any kind of assumptions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227891156463 0.25644967241 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.156462585034 0.15541462614 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0578231292517 0.0836205057962 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.0520304965353 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030612244898 0.0272364105082 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0986394557823 0.125424944231 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0374149659864 0.0416121511921 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79361516933 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047619047619 0.026700313972 178% => OK
Particles: 0.00680272108844 0.001811407834 376% => OK
Determiners: 0.159863945578 0.113004496875 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0442176870748 0.0255425247493 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0408163265306 0.0127820249294 319% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1837.0 2731.13054187 67% => OK
No of words: 280.0 446.07635468 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.56071428571 6.12365571057 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.57801047555 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385714285714 0.378187486979 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282142857143 0.287650121315 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182142857143 0.208842608468 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103571428571 0.135150697306 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79361516933 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 207.018472906 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.469332199767 95% => OK
Word variations: 42.1244767604 52.1807786196 81% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 31.1111111111 23.2022227129 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.204316294 57.7814097925 186% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.111111111 141.986410481 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 23.2022227129 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.724660767414 199% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 3.58251231527 447% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.3253968254 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.46575342466 1.8405768891 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52413765548 0.441005458295 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.262886601134 0.135418324435 194% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.145051913716 0.0829849096947 175% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.73357767618 0.58762219726 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196750492406 0.147661913831 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297997036421 0.193483328276 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102083073689 0.0970749176394 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.522179630009 0.42659136922 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0688938797343 0.0774707102158 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398210024668 0.312017818177 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699968578488 0.0698173142475 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.33743842365 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 6.46551724138 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 9.0 5.36822660099 168% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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