The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
While it may be true that the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders,this author's argument does not make a cogent case for increased threats based on the strength of its borders. There are many disasters in the one's country not only immigration through the borders but also through the various means like through waterways,airways etc. Many countries are having haunting incidents. Even though if the borders are alert and conscious there are no signs in minimising the threats to the country.
Consider,the attack on the twin towers in United states inspite of having advancement in technology,strict rules,security no one could be able to stop the attack. Is this happend due to lack of strengh in borders? obviosly,no. There are many sources for people to communicate and successful in their plan which resulted in the massive destruction of people and property. This made the country more exacerbated.Threat will be from any source and the results are capricious.
Additionally,the Mumbai attacks which occured in India. Every men in the borders of India strive hard for their country's safety day and night. But couldn't stop the attack. The invasion is through the waterways. The illegal migrants recklessly killed many people in mumbai chtrapathi railway station ,taj and oberoi hotels . The attacks are becoming imperceptible and deteriorate. In order to avoid the attacks government need to take safety measures and comeuppance the terrorists severly.
A strict, sophistication in security,full alertness in the border may result in the reduction of the illegal immigration.However,this author's argument is not likely significantly persuade the autonomy of any country is based on the strengths of its borders.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292604501608 0.25644967241 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.131832797428 0.15541462614 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868167202572 0.0836205057962 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353697749196 0.0520304965353 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0192926045016 0.0272364105082 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131832797428 0.125424944231 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0289389067524 0.0416121511921 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.34476277433 2.79052419416 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192926045016 0.026700313972 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.131832797428 0.113004496875 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128617363344 0.0255425247493 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0064308681672 0.0127820249294 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1747.0 2731.13054187 64% => OK
No of words: 275.0 446.07635468 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35272727273 6.12365571057 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.57801047555 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414545454545 0.378187486979 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323636363636 0.287650121315 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.208842608468 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130909090909 0.135150697306 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34476277433 2.79052419416 120% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 207.018472906 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.469332199767 119% => OK
Word variations: 57.1727425931 52.1807786196 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1764705882 23.2022227129 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3163714064 57.7814097925 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 141.986410481 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 23.2022227129 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.724660767414 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.58251231527 502% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.5401069519 51.9672348444 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.43103448276 1.8405768891 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.569116265274 0.441005458295 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0791540255669 0.135418324435 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485865722292 0.0829849096947 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518896878339 0.58762219726 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194928942469 0.147661913831 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213669093268 0.193483328276 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135564487062 0.0970749176394 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443235898769 0.42659136922 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0353513477953 0.0774707102158 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.434865679541 0.312017818177 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846820272157 0.0698173142475 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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